We were writing about the holidays and what we had to do elaborate to a Orientation, Sequence of events and General statements.
WALT - We are learning to write a recount using a hook in the Orientation and elaboration of 1 idea.
Orientation
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Hook- WOOOHOOO!!!! So excited “Shh the movie is starting”
Me my aunty and my brother and my too little cousins.
We went to the Movies/Cinema.
Despicable Me 3
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Sequence of events
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Watching a movie 5 of us in each seat together, Cinema seats. Staying as quiet as possible, Trying not to say anything about what is on the big screen, 5 to 10 centimeter voices.
Got lots of food for the movie, Lollies, Bars, Chips.
I tried not to make the crunching noise when you eat chips but I ended up making the crunching noise, I ended up annoying people around me.
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General statement
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That movie was really gelid, hope to see another.
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WOOOHOOO!!!! So excited “ Shh!! the movie is starting” In the holidays me and my brother’s aunty and her kids all went to the Movies/Cinema. The movie we went to go see was Despicable Me 3.
On Thursday We got some food for the movie we had some fun going to the Riccarton mall just going to get the food the food was Lollies the lollies were Starbursts, A couple of bars the bars were chocolate bars and some Chips the chips were Chicken, Salt n, Vinegar and just normal chips after that we went to watch the movie.
We are watching the movie and all five of us were sitting in our seats. It's a little hard when there is something so cool like an easter egg in the movie and you want to point it out or shout it out that’s what I felt like, I tried to have a 5 to 10 centimeter voice.
While the movie was playing I was eating the chicken chips and while I was eating the chips I made a crunching noise it was a little bit annoying for other people around me I could tell even my aunty was annoyed and I kept making the crunching noise. Then I stopped because it would make the movie a little terrible because of the crunching just going away other people around me would just hear the crunching.
In the Movies/Cinema was really dark all I could see was just the screen it was dark as the night sky what would be funny is that I went there at night, it looked like we were just out side without any properties around us but just chairs and other people it was so dark and the screen was so bright as bright as a laser in your eye.
The movie was so gelid/cool my favorite part in the movie was The minions started to sing in like a performance they just started to sing, Hope to see another when the time comes.
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