Hook- As the Green skin beast CREEPS!!! And tries not to wake up the Kitten
The Green ferocious beast creeps along the floor stomping slowly, quietly because there is a white and gorgeous kitten was sleeping on a pink dotted kitten pillow the kitten is asleep like a bug in a rug so the green beast stops in the mid air with one knee high over the kitten he slowly tries to get over the kitten but he will make a sound if he moves. Move and the ground will make creak sound so what he has to do is stay calm and find a solution.
Prrr!! Sleeping sucks but I still want to sleep so I wonder what I might do when I wake up ok ok I probably should stop talking to myself and go to sleep so what am I going to dream about know what about the candyland place okay so then let’s go to sleep then. Ahh!! What is that sound hopefully it is not an intruder to harm my owner.
I should wake up ahh! What is that it looks like it is green it looks at me like I am some food I better take care of him I should ah do some karate onna him so that teacher teached the karate to him and I sore most of it so um karate chop and slice Crack!!! oh no your leg looks great how about some makeup Boom!!! What happened to your nose It looks ahh nice how about that who is the baddy know oh who is the baddy know? Oh no what have I done Im sorry.
As the cat is saying sorry to the green beast the goblin moves and the ground drops beneath the white fluffy kitten and it falls very quickly not being able to see where it is in the air so it falls to it’s death and good night folks that was the play for tonight and good night.
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I like your story and picture Nikora I loved your two twists they were very unexpecting twist on the third paragraph there's a word that dosent make sense onna maybe you could change it.
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