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Friday, 4 November 2016

Persuasive writing



Reason….
P - Scooting is dangerous. Because of how people do tricks and hurt themselves

E - Scooters hard and solid. Because if you're in a crowd and you move your scooter from another location really fast people might be damaged  

E - Small children get hurt


Reason….
P - scooting takes over lots of space for less people to play around. 


E - Be unaware of risk that happens there are big risks that can happen too. 
E - It is dangerous


Reason….
P - This sport is dangerous so if you know you're not meant.

E - I know we shouldn't scoot around places that we could hit someone.


E- Less space for other that want to play there.

I believe that people should not scoot at schools and at lunchtimes.

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